Course Books Second Ed - Revision history

CourseDirector at 00:00, 27 December 2018

2018-12-27T00:00:34Z

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	Cons: poor distribution and bad pricing model, though this may have improved... currently the site is showing me about $8. O.K.: its also a flat $14.99 on Amazon. No hardcovers.		Cons: poor distribution and bad pricing model, though this may have improved... currently the site is showing me about $8. O.K.: its also a flat $14.99 on Amazon. No hardcovers.

			[[Category:Course Books]]

CourseDirector: /* PTA */

2018-01-26T17:11:19Z

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	====Wildfire Emerges====		====Wildfire Emerges====
	'''FINAL:''' this story is getting shitcanned. Sorry. It sucked anyway.		'''FINAL:''' this story is getting shitcanned. Sorry. It sucked anyway.

	~~Still needs to be tackled, ungh.~~

	*I'm not really happy with [[Wildfire Emerges]]: the Rian character never really "went" anywhere, so to speak...
	**How long is this story? The Nimi re-write clocked in at 18 pages, maybe I can just drop this one?
	***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?

	~~'''UPDATE:''' Wildfire Emerges needs either full over-haul or deletion.~~

	====Reunion====		====Reunion====
	*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]] ~~I want to just flat out delete the section that describes what everyone was doing in between graduation and the 10-year reunion. This will help balance out the extra pages added by A New Darkness.~~		*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]]
	**Might also re-slug this one as simply Reunion

	I did review this one fairly recently in my quest for Slayer Dragon names, all I want to remove here is remove the 2 pages or so that describe what everyone did between then and now, and maybe correct some of the awful dialogue...

	After discussion, its agreed: changes to this story will be as follows		After discussion, its agreed: changes to this story will be as follows
	*Re-title to simply "Reunion"		*Re-title to simply "Reunion"
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	====The Truth Finally Revealed====		====The Truth Finally Revealed====
	Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes", did some very minor re-writing and am now really happy with the story~~. The title has always been the part that bugged me.~~		Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes", did some very minor re-writing and am now really happy with the story.

	~~'''''Ch-ch-ch-changes''''' changed the title to Truth in Ashes and made a few minor edits~~.

	====Virus====		====Virus====
	~~Only minor re-writes to edit out direct mentions of HIV.~~

	~~Also fixing the bullshit about plasma coolant... god what was I thinking?!~~

	The Saratoga crashes a lot...		The Saratoga crashes a lot...

CourseDirector: /* Interiors */

2018-01-07T20:42:22Z

Interiors

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	#[[Dragon's Teeth]]		#[[Dragon's Teeth]]
	#[[Fade Out]]		#[[Fade Out]]
			*Long Night Happens HERE
	#[[Fade In]]		#[[Fade In]]
	#[[Jason]]		#[[Jason]]

CourseDirector at 20:22, 7 January 2018

2018-01-07T20:22:35Z

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	Another step in this process will be migrating away from AuthorHouse. Which will make me sad, but the time has come.		Another step in this process will be migrating away from AuthorHouse. Which will make me sad, but the time has come.

			==Interiors==

			<table border="1">
			<tr>
			<td cellpadding="10">

			# [[The Wings of a Dragon]]
			# [[Through the Night]]
			# [[Disarming]]
			# [[Wildfire Emerges]]
			# [[Ulysses Last Stand]]
			# [[The Sun Also Rises]]
			# [[Virus]]
			# [[The Truth Finally Revealed]]
			# [[Clouds Last Run]]
			# [[Last Stand, Tora, Tora, Tora]]
			# [[The Slayer Dragons]]
			# [[Return of the Dragon]]
			# [[The Dark Lord Nimi]]
			# [[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]]
			# [[Revival]]
			# [[The Red Tiger]]
			# [[The New Recruit]]
			# [[The Path to Ascension(Story)]]

			</td><td>

			# [[The Eye of a Dragon]]
			# [[Tale of a Gun]]
			# [[First Stand]]
			# [[Counter Strike]]
			# [[Flight of the Takahe]]
			# [[Against the Wind]]
			# [[Dragoon Lancers: Wrath of the Lancer's Light]]
			# [[CTRL+Z]]
			# [[Flash Point]]
			# [[Retrospectus]]
			# [[Line in the Sand]]
			# [[Point of the Spear]]
			# [[Marigold]]
			# [[Falling Dragon]]
			# [[The Road to War(Story)]]

			</td><td>

			# [[The Breath of a Dragon]]
			# [[Introductions]]
			# [[Beachhead]]
			# [[Flying Lessons]]
			# [[The Liger, the Sorceress, and… the Refrigerator?]]
			# [[Falling Sky]]
			# [[Sunset]]
			# [[Clause]]
			# [[Catastrophe]]
			# [[Fan Fiction]]
			# [[Daylight]]
			# [[Forbidden]]
			# [[Dusk]]
			# [[Forgotten]]
			# [[The Tiger's Eye]]
			# [[Cavalry]]
			# [[Absolution]]
			# [[The Concourse to Victory(Story)]]

			</td><td>

			#[[The Claw of a Dragon]]
			#[[Tsubasa Kyoku]]
			#[[The Box]]
			#[[Avenger]]
			#[[Still Life]]
			#[[Masks]]
			#[[Heritage]]
			#[[The Strange Matter Sword]]
			#[[Storm]]
			#[[The Hunted]]
			#[[Half the Fun]]
			#[[Princess Megami]]
			#[[True]]
			#[[Responsibility]]
			#[[Not Hunting]]
			#[[The Final Trial]]
			#[[Infinity]]
			#[[Contract]]
			#[[Full Circle]]
			#[[Joshua]]
			#[[Aspect of Death]]
			#[[The Inclination to Destiny(Story)]]

			</td><td>

			#[[The Voice of a Dragon]]
			#[[Ability]]
			#[[Priorities]]
			#[[Presence]]
			#[[Debt]]
			#[[Backfire]]
			#[[The Furthest Star]]
			#[[Echoes]]
			#[[Ego]]
			#[[Never]]
			#[[The Other Half]]
			#[[False Gods]]
			#[[Decisive Action]]
			#[[Obsession]]
			#[[Heart of the Journey]]
			#[[Dragon's Teeth]]
			#[[Fade Out]]
			#[[Fade In]]
			#[[Jason]]
			#[[Qurom]]
			#[[Lily]]
			#[[The Trinity Alternative]]
			#[[First Sight]]
			#[[Turn]]
			#[[The ByWay to Freedom(Story)]](Obviously)

			</td></tr></table>

	==Books==		==Books==

CourseDirector at 00:28, 18 April 2017

2017-04-18T00:28:29Z

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	====Wildfire Emerges====		====Wildfire Emerges====
			'''FINAL:''' this story is getting shitcanned. Sorry. It sucked anyway.

	Still needs to be tackled, ungh.		Still needs to be tackled, ungh.

CourseDirector: /* PTA */

2017-04-17T16:45:05Z

PTA

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	**Might also re-slug this one as simply Reunion		**Might also re-slug this one as simply Reunion

	I did review this one fairly recently in my quest for ~~SLayer~~ Dragon names, all I want to remove here is remove the 2 pages or so that describe what everyone did between then and now, and maybe correct some of the awful dialogue...		I did review this one fairly recently in my quest for Slayer Dragon names, all I want to remove here is remove the 2 pages or so that describe what everyone did between then and now, and maybe correct some of the awful dialogue...

			After discussion, its agreed: changes to this story will be as follows
			*Re-title to simply "Reunion"
			*cut out part about what everyone did
			*oh god fix some of the dialogue

			I think the story could stand to take a complete pass on editing.

	====The Dark Lord Nimi====		====The Dark Lord Nimi====

CourseDirector: /* Wildfire Emerges */

2017-04-17T15:32:58Z

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	**How long is this story? The Nimi re-write clocked in at 18 pages, maybe I can just drop this one?		**How long is this story? The Nimi re-write clocked in at 18 pages, maybe I can just drop this one?
	***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?		***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?

			'''UPDATE:''' Wildfire Emerges needs either full over-haul or deletion.

	====Reunion====		====Reunion====

CourseDirector: /* PTA */

2017-04-16T14:36:08Z

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	Surprisingly not that bad.		Surprisingly not that bad.

	*[[The Dark Lord Nimi]] is getting a from-the-ground re-write.		====Wildfire Emerges====
	**Re-Write is called [[A New Darkness]] and, ~~if I do say so myself... freakin' nailed it~~.		Still needs to be tackled, ungh.

	*I'm not really happy with [[Wildfire Emerges]]: the Rian character never really "went" anywhere, so to speak...		*I'm not really happy with [[Wildfire Emerges]]: the Rian character never really "went" anywhere, so to speak...
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	***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?		***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?

			====Reunion====
	*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]] I want to just flat out delete the section that describes what everyone was doing in between graduation and the 10-year reunion. This will help balance out the extra pages added by A New Darkness.		*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]] I want to just flat out delete the section that describes what everyone was doing in between graduation and the 10-year reunion. This will help balance out the extra pages added by A New Darkness.
			**Might also re-slug this one as simply Reunion

	~~All told~~, ~~3 stories~~ that ~~need~~ some ~~thought and 1 total re-write~~.		I did review this one fairly recently in my quest for SLayer Dragon names, all I want to remove here is remove the 2 pages or so that describe what everyone did between then and now, and maybe correct some of the awful dialogue...

	====The Dark Lord Nimi====		====The Dark Lord Nimi====
			*[[The Dark Lord Nimi]] is getting a from-the-ground re-write.
			**Re-Write is called [[A New Darkness]] and, if I do say so myself... freakin' nailed it.

	Completed a from-the-ground re-write, will need editing, but very happy with the re-write.		Completed a from-the-ground re-write, will need editing, but very happy with the re-write.

	====The Truth Finally Revealed====		====The Truth Finally Revealed====
	Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes", did some very minor re-writing and am now really happy with the story. The title has always been the part that bugged me.		Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes", did some very minor re-writing and am now really happy with the story. The title has always been the part that bugged me.

			'''''Ch-ch-ch-changes''''' changed the title to Truth in Ashes and made a few minor edits.

	====Virus====		====Virus====
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	The Saratoga crashes a lot...		The Saratoga crashes a lot...

			'''''success!''''' the edits to virus went well and am much happier with the story. Didn't actually take much.

	===RTW===		===RTW===

CourseDirector: /* PTA */

2017-04-14T22:34:09Z

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	*[[The Dark Lord Nimi]] is getting a from-the-ground re-write.		*[[The Dark Lord Nimi]] is getting a from-the-ground re-write.
	**Re-Write is called [[A New Darkness]] and, if I do say so myself... freakin' nailed it.		**Re-Write is called [[A New Darkness]] and, if I do say so myself... freakin' nailed it.

	*[[Virus]] needs some re-writing. It's O.K., but I think I want to fix the part with the plasma coolant and make it not about HIV.

	*I'm not really happy with [[Wildfire Emerges]]: the Rian character never really "went" anywhere, so to speak...		*I'm not really happy with [[Wildfire Emerges]]: the Rian character never really "went" anywhere, so to speak...
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	***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?		***Then again, the new Nimi story also focuses on raw-form casters, maybe this one just needs to be re-written to provide a better overview of the art?

	*Always been a touch iffy on [[The Truth Finally Revealed]]: maybe just need some feedback on it? is kiiiiiiind of important?

	*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]] I want to just flat out delete the section that describes what everyone was doing in between graduation and the 10-year reunion. This will help balance out the extra pages added by A New Darkness.		*[[The Reunion of the Eighth Power]] I want to just flat out delete the section that describes what everyone was doing in between graduation and the 10-year reunion. This will help balance out the extra pages added by A New Darkness.
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	====The Dark Lord Nimi====		====The Dark Lord Nimi====
	Completed a from-the-ground re-write, will need editing.		Completed a from-the-ground re-write, will need editing, but very happy with the re-write.

	====The Truth Finally Revealed====		====The Truth Finally Revealed====
	Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes" with ~~some~~ minor re-writes. ~~Will find out when~~ I ~~get inside~~.		Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes", did some very minor re-writing and am now really happy with the story. The title has always been the part that bugged me.

			====Virus====
			Only minor re-writes to edit out direct mentions of HIV.

			Also fixing the bullshit about plasma coolant... god what was I thinking?!

			The Saratoga crashes a lot...

	===RTW===		===RTW===

CourseDirector: /* PTA */

2017-04-13T16:49:18Z

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	All told, 3 stories that need some thought and 1 total re-write.		All told, 3 stories that need some thought and 1 total re-write.

			====The Dark Lord Nimi====
			Completed a from-the-ground re-write, will need editing.

			====The Truth Finally Revealed====
			Being re-titled as "Truth in Ashes" with some minor re-writes. Will find out when I get inside.

	===RTW===		===RTW===